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Latest post Thu, Nov 5 2009 11:45 AM by Avangi. 3 replies.
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Ter  +  962327 Thu, 05 Nov 09 11:10 AM
I'm self-learning how to break down sentences. Came across this sentence in the paper, and I'm stumped.


Any help is greatly appreciated.


"Crammed among the rock, the one-time feudal home of Monaco's Grimaldi royal family has a glorious setting and; for cyclists, an equally glorious descent through the Val d'Enfer (Valley of Hell), a gully that, amid the Alpilles' skull-like boulders, seems appropriately named."


Breakdown:

Crammed among the rock - VP

the one-time feudal home of Monaco's Grimaldi royal family has a glorious setting - main clause

and - coordinator

for cyclists - PP

an equally glorious descent - the 2nd main clause

through the Val d'Enfer - PP

a gully that seems appropriately named - dependent clause?

amid the Alpilles' skull-like boulders - PP


Is there anything wrong with the breakdown above?


Thanks!

Ter
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Avangi  +  962335 Thu, 05 Nov 09 11:25 AM
Not really my cup of tea.  The semicolon puzzles me greatly. (I suppose it separates the two direct objects.)


I see only one main clause: home has setting and descent.


The only other thing I'd call a clause is "that seems appropriately named."

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Ter  +  962340 Thu, 05 Nov 09 11:39 AM
thanks a lot! uh... got fouled up by the "and".. thought it coordinated two clauses. The length of the sentence and all the brackets and semi-colon really make it difficult.


"a gully that.. seems appropriately named"


That's a relative clause and also a dependent clause right?

Ter
Anonymous, 16 days ago
Ter: Until the experts answer you, here are a few ideas: (1) Crammed among the rocks = participial clause that modifies "feudal home"; (2) "descent" is the second object of "has" ("setting" being the first object); (3) "gully" is in apposition to "Val d'Enfer." I, too, am eager to see what the experts say.
Avangi  +  962347 Thu, 05 Nov 09 11:45 AM
I agree.
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