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Anonymous  #466858  Mon, 21 Jan 08 01:51 AM

Hi there

            I am working on writing an English homepage for my company,( i got to say this is way out of my league)

I want to ask `In 2000, with the expansion of the company, ### trading moved into a new office building and extended its business line to the import of Chinese chemical materials.`  is there any grammatical errors in the phrases?   Or you think there is other native-speaker-like expression?  Anyone is welcome to drop any suggestions, I would really appreciate.


                                                                                                                            Josephine

  
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Mister Micawber  #466880  Mon, 21 Jan 08 04:07 AM

In 2000, with the expansion of the company, ### Trading moved into a new office building and broadened its business to include the importation of Chinese chemicals.

  
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Anonymous  #466883  Mon, 21 Jan 08 04:39 AM

thanks a lot. I really appreciate your help.

                                 Joe

  
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