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WANG CHUN

#80372 Fri, 11 Mar 05 10:30 AM

Hello
Can you give me a hand? please
Help me check these sentnces.
Thank you very much

Smoking puts peoples health at risk.

Smokes are made of toxic material that is detrimental to people’s health.

No matter how I tried to persuade him to quit smoking, he still continued to light his cigarette.

The policy of abnning smoking can decrease in frequency of smokers suffering from lung cancer.

When employees enjoying smoking at work, seeming to not to pay attention on their duties.

Once workers are not to light up their cigarettes, they just put their energy and effort in their tasks.

WANG CHUN

Joined on Thu, Sep 23 2004

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Mister Micawber

#80403 Fri, 11 Mar 05 01:40 PM

Smoking puts people's health at risk.

Smoke is composed of toxic material that is detrimental to people’s health.

No matter how hard I tried to persuade him to quit smoking, he still continued to light his cigarettes.

The policy of banning smoking can decrease the number of smokers suffering from lung cancer.

When employees enjoy smoking at work, they seem not to pay attention to their duties.

When workers do not light up their cigarettes, they put their energy and effort into their tasks.

Mister Micawber

Joined on Wed, Aug 4 2004

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