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Anonymous  #457092  Wed, 26 Dec 07 05:29 AM
please help me if my formal writing is right...
 
Dear All,
 
Any forms (leave forms, invoices, memos, etc.) that require the signature/approval of SMIT should be submitted to me prior to him.

 

Furthermore, you can forward your request pertaining to meeting reservations and other office assistance to me.

  
Mister Micawber  #457100  Wed, 26 Dec 07 05:48 AM

I would do this:

Dear All,
 
Any forms (leave forms, invoices, memos, etc.) that require the signature/approval of SMIT should be submitted to me prior to being sent to him.  You can also forward requests for meeting reservations and other office assistance to me.


  
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