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Tue, 17 Aug 04 10:18 AM
hello,
following sentence which one is correct?
1)an analysis model is needed to
know how many extra-collisions actually brings up by the
power control protocol.
or
2)an analysis model needed
to know how many extra-collisions actually brings up by the
power control protocol.
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Mister Micawber
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Tue, 17 Aug 04 02:50 PM
The first one, Word, but it requires other revision, I think, also:
'1) An analysis model is needed to understand how many extra-collisions are actually brought up by the power control protocol. '
And are you sure that 'extra-collisions' should be hyphenated?
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