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Superrawzzi  #400096  Fri, 03 Aug 07 08:15 PM


Hi, I’m ______. I’m fourteen and entering the 9th grade at Monsignor Edward Pace High School. Since the young age of seven, I have been playing basketball with friends, Teams and Family. So you shouldn’t be surprise to know that I tried out for the Lady Spartans Basketball team. While I have been practicing with them, the team has become a family to me. It’s filled with educated, kind and respectful young women who share a love and interest in basketball like I. As you can see I’m very excited to be joining a team that has won the Florida State Championship three years in a row. But as freshman year swiftly approaches, my parents and I have been faced with a dilemma. The cost of school, books, uniforms, basketball uniforms, and Lunch has added a giant burden on my parents.  That why I was wondering if your company would be interested in financially helping me become a well educated Lady Spartans Basketball player. For awhile now it has always been my dream of playing in the WNBA. With your help and support I will become one more step closer to achieving my life goal. 



Thank you for taking the time and interest to read this letter. Please feel free to contact my mother at ______. Also you can take a look at the school site at http://www.msgr-pace.com/.


Yours sincerely,

 

______

 

 

* Please help me improve my letter. I know its pretty bad but its only a draft. So please feel free to make suggestions. Thanks

  
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Mister Micawber  #400327  Sat, 04 Aug 07 03:24 PM
Dear Mr ____ :

 My name is
______.  I am fourteen years old and entering the ninth grade at Monsignor Edward Pace High School. Since the age of seven, I have been playing basketball with friends and family and on local teams.  Recently I tried out for the Lady Spartans Basketball team. Since I have been practicing with them, the team has become like a family to me. It composed of educated, kind and respectful young women who share the same love for and interest in basketball that I do.  I am very excited to be joining a team that has won the Florida State Championship three years in a row.

But as my freshman year swiftly approaches, my parents and I are facing a dilemma. The cost of tuition, books, uniforms, basketball uniforms, and meals has added a big burden on my parents' finances.  That is why I am wondering if your company would be interested in financially helping me to become a well-educated Lady Spartans Basketball player. It has been my dream to play in the WNBA. With your help and support, I could get a step closer to achieving my life goal.

Thank you very much for taking the time and trouble to read this letter.  If you can help, or if you would just like more information, please contact my mother at ______.  Also, please take a look at our school site at http://www.msgr-pace.com/.

Yours sincerely,


  
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