Help needed: writing an application letter!!!

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Bloom  #79372  Mon, 07 Mar 05 11:04 PM
Dear Forums,

Can you help me with brushing up my letter?
Thank you very much.

Yours faithfully,

Z. Murad


Boerenlaan 14
6138 BK Sittard
The Netherlands

Hotel Career Centre
192 Old Christchurch Road
Bournemouth Hants
Great Brittain

March 5, 2005

Dear Sir/Madam,

I read your advertisement about how to become a receptionist in The Times of 27 February.

I am a 17-year-old girl and I would like to work in a hotel abroad or in an international hotel in my own country, after my final examination in The Netherlands. Your advertisement seems to offer an ideal way of combining training for a job and improving my fluency. Therefore I would like to apply for a brochure of courses.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,


Z. Murad


  
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nona the brit  #79377  Mon, 07 Mar 05 11:11 PM
I'm a bit confused. Are they advertising for a receptionist or are they advertising a residential language course? Or are they specifically advertising for a receptionist and offering language training?

What did the advertisement say?
  
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nona the brit  #79628  Tue, 08 Mar 05 09:08 PM
See Post:79624

As you seem to possibly be the original (if not all four) poster I will give you some help. I guess this is some kind of residential working holiday/course?


Boerenlaan 14
6138 BK Sittard
The Netherlands

Hotel Career Centre
192 Old Christchurch Road
Bournemouth Hants
Great Brittain Great Britain, or more usually, England, or UK

March 5, 2005

Dear Sir/Madam,

I read your advertisement for the hotel receptionist (working holiday/training courses?) in The Times of 27 February.

I am a 17-year-old girl and I would like to work in a hotel abroad, or in an international hotel in my own country, after my final examination in The Netherlands. Your advertisement seems to offer an ideal way of combining training for a job with improving my fluency in English. Therefore I would like to apply for a brochure of courses.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,


Z. Murad
  
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