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Antonija
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Sun, 12 Mar 06 05:03 PM
Hello!
Which of the two is better? Thank you
The woman should tilt her head or lean on her elbow and she should firstly announce that sex in the marriage is not good/is of no good.
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davkett,
3 yr 254 days ago
Give a little more preceding context.
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Antonija
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Sun, 12 Mar 06 06:25 PM
Now, I would like to say a few words about nagging, the most powerful weapon of married women. You may not be able to blackmail your already fed up husband anymore by threatening to leave him, but if you repeat the problem ten or twenty times in a low, but persistent voice, you will sail into a grandiose conflict, similar to the big naval battle of the old masters in which you will, visually though, enjoy. There is no more beautiful picture than the one of/that shows an upset phlegmatic, who every husband gradually turns into. It is particularly appropriate to nag about sex, eternal source of dissatisfaction. You should start nagging as later as you can, when both partners are obviously tired. The woman should tilt her head or lean on her elbow and she should right away announce that sex in the marriage is not good/is of no good.
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davkett
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Mon, 13 Mar 06 12:23 AM
already-fed-up
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not good/is of no good (Neither one sounds right.) Maybe "not so great".
also, in which you will, visually though, enjoy is awkward.
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Antonija
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Wed, 15 Mar 06 02:56 PM
Thanks Davkett.
''visually though'' -meaning that you will not speak with your husband, because you will be pretending to be offended but you will be able to visually enjoy the scene (of seeing him, who is usually phlegmatic, upset).
I hope it is clearer now
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davkett
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Thu, 16 Mar 06 02:38 PM
Then--
similar to the big naval battle of the old masters in which you will find enjoyment, though only / if only visually.
or,
similar to the big naval battle of the old masters which you will enjoy, though only / if only visually.
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pieanne
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Thu, 16 Mar 06 03:00 PM
<You should start nagging as later as you can,>
It should be "as late as you can".
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I'm glad to help, but I'm not a native! And please excuse my typos...
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Kajjo
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Thu, 16 Mar 06 04:24 PM
Antonija wrote: | | Now, I would like to say a few words about nagging, the most powerful weapon of married women. You may not be able to blackmail your already fed up husband anymore by threatening to leave him, but if you repeat the problem ten or twenty times in a low, but persistent voice, you will sail into a grandiose conflict, similar to the big naval battle of the old masters in which you will, visually though, enjoy. There is no more beautiful picture than the one of/that shows an upset phlegmatic, who every husband gradually turns into. It is particularly appropriate to nag about sex (-- the) eternal source of dissatisfaction. You should start nagging as later as you can, when both partners are obviously tired. The woman should tilt her head or lean on her elbow and she should right away announce that sex in the marriage is not good/is of no good. |
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1. already fed-up husband 2. of 3. is not that good / is not that enjoyable / is quite boring / leaves a lot to be desired 4. "as late as you can" = maybe better "...start nagging late at night, when ..." Kajjo PS Interesting book you are translating .. strange and wrong facts, however, in many paragraphs, but that's surely not your fault
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davkett
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Thu, 16 Mar 06 05:21 PM
Kajjo wrote: | |
1. already fed-up husband
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I may be wrong, but it seems to me that in this instance a hyphen also belongs between already and fed-up.
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