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Orcun  +  99601 Sun, 15 May 05 01:54 PM
Living in this city/i know it's pity/
Hard to live on with this kitty/
life,sometimes funny/sometimes fatality/
Same places/everyday the same faces/
everything routine/especially worse for a teen/
i been disputed and hated since the day i been/
aimless people,gettin deeper,no one left clean/
some is deprive of a coin/and some is so mean/
they don't care a fig/you the selfish pig/
shoeblacks workin hard to make some money/
but their parents snatch it even a penny/
in all of our lives full with dramas/
compassionate mamas/raisin kids without pramas/
everybody doing what's strikes their fancy/
it's hard to stand if you don't have tendency/
to be on the streets/and striptease/
i don't think it makes you pleased/
got nothin to do,it's compulsory/
hellcares your life,ain't no one feels sorry/
you gotta earn your life in a way to survive/
i have always been away just to be alive/
pops line-up waitin for their pension/
so many hitches that have never been mentioned/
we still livin like as if we were in ice-age/
all of 'em full with rage/no one is sage/
everybody out the streets rampage/
richies in the clubs drink champagnes/
whereas backstreets full with junkies/
losin the conscious tryin to rank G's/
some flees/everday facing with seizes/
being in pursuit of police/make thugz displeased/
dischargin clips/let me give you a tip/
never make the crowd flipped/
it's midnight/the time when im full of emotions/
some pan my steelo and wanna make new rap motions/
im a gangsta rapper,but i sometimes drown in grief ocean/
that's why i spit about tragic shits and my fortune/
cursing everything and the day i was born/
i got torn/and exhausted after fate beat me with it's horn/
im worned/nothing is same as it seemz/
everythin is mortal like a beam/life is all about a dream/
we da playaz and the only difference is teams/
running after the same aim wit different speeds/

When shit starts trigerring the brainstorm/
you feel like worn and torn/
since the day i was born/
i had no lovely sensation/despite everything taxing my patience/
feelings pass like a streak/what is love now is a bag full of tricks/
just to have a b****/i can't be a prick
unless you're cool with yourself,things will seem slick/
in case of touch&go try to be bolder/
how long you gonna keep crying on one's shoulder?/
sometimes people will get colder/the more you get older/
the better you clutch/what is being done now may mean too much/
for laters/haters will always be/try to see/ the truth/
no ruth/cast what you feel to his tooth/
at times happenings blow the top/afterlaps occur slap/
bearing is laborious/but im Tha Rebellious/
i can still stand/cuz i take most shits as odds and ends/
bends may seem hard to turn/stamina is what I earn/
as long as you burn your shit/there'll be no need to return/
truth must be admitted,life is f****** stern!/

Orcun aka Tha-Rebelllious

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Ja-Mez  +  99613 Sun, 15 May 05 02:32 PM
lol i'd hit you back with a rap but ive been censored way too many times to waste any more typing.

pretty nice, but im not feeling your beat, its like you're just putting out rhymes
Joined on Thu, Mar 10 2005
Full Member 214
viva la jerry
Anonymous, 4 yr 98 days ago

GROOVY IDEAS AND SOME WEIRD RANDOM WORDS ... This could be straightend out with more lyrical rythm.... I would say it would make a good song !

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Anonymous, 3 yr 315 days ago
yo i like your rhymes its tight
so hit me back please i look really good
i need a homie even throw i already have homies
but i want to get to know you so write back if you is on and my name is shanice ok baby.

Anonymous, 3 yr 305 days ago

yo this is Humza think that you could do better

work harder on the rythem if you want that cheddar

Anonymous, 2 yr 69 days ago

Yo bro ya rhymes is lame / I tell ya *** to get down and give me brain when I flow i just flow insane only 15 and i got older women screamin my name. I just flow like the river man i'm so cold when i spit i'll make u shiver man i'm so sick that i need some relief i'm so icy got diamonds in my teeth i'm racin in this game like a track meet there beef in the kitchen  and i just came to eat. i eat rapper just like a treat and the *** of ya girl i just planned to beat. ha ha ya digg

Da Rookie album coming soon Ya Digg.

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