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Stevenukd  #241167  Thu, 29 Jun 06 12:24 PM

Dear Teachers,

1. In life, a thing which deserved for us to do or not, it still depends on the way we acknowledge it. Be brave and do what our hearts tell, and after that in life we will not regret that we didn't do it. I hope that each of us will be in our best friends' arms.

- Is this natural?

Thanks a bunch to Teachers,

 Stevenukd.

  
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Clive  #241291  Thu, 29 Jun 06 06:13 PM

Hi,

1. In life, a thing which deserved for us to do or not, it still depends on the way we acknowledge it. Be brave and do what our hearts tell, and after that in life we will not regret that we didn't do it. I hope that each of us will be in our best friends' arms.

- Is this natural? I understand your idea, but there are some things about this that make it hard for me to understand the details of what you are saying. Maybe this:

1. In life, a thing which deserved for us to do or not, <<< you need to say this another way it still depends on the way we acknowledge it. We should be brave and do what our hearts tell us, and after that in life we will not regret that we didn't do it.  I hope that each of us will be surrounded by the love of our best friends.

Best wishes, Clive

  
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