Are my paragrahs connected or disjointed please? HELP

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Cece  #258009  Mon, 21 Aug 06 09:47 PM

Are my paragraphs connected or disjointed please?  Can you assist me please?

On behalf of A Non-Profit Organization, thank you for your generous contribution to the Sports Physicals.

The PA system was a wonderful and welcome benefit in helping to organize and time save during our Sports Physicals.  

 Because of your generosity and involvement, our young student athletes have the opportunity to participate year round sports competition and training.

Warm regards,

Cece

  
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