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Anonymous  #536266  Thu, 03 Jul 08 02:51 PM

Hi, I would like to ask you for a help as I am still improving my English and want avoid mistakes in my covering letter. I really would appreciate it if you could check the letter, especially red paragraph.

 

 

Dear Xyx,

 

I am writing to apply for the position of Purchase Ledger Clerk, as currently being advertised on your website.

 

I have a wide range of office experience gained working as clerical officer in many companies.
 

Recently (I stated in my CV ‘June 2008 to present’), I decided to increase my knowledge in purchase ledger. As you will see from my CV, I am expecting exam’s results and certificate from Pitman Training. During the course I learned how to maintain the purchase ledger, process invoices and carry out a bank reconciliation. I am sure it gave me good background to step on the career ladder as a Purchase Ledger Clerk.

I have enclosed my CV for your review. Thank you for considering my application and look forward to hearing from you. I am available for interview at your convenience.

 

Yours sincerely,
ZXU

 

  
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RayH  #536362  Thu, 03 Jul 08 06:19 PM
I have a wide range of office experience gained working as a clerical officer in many companies.

Recently (I stated in my CV ‘June 2008 to present’), I decided to increase my knowledge in purchase ledger. As you will see from my CV, I am expecting exam’s results and certification from Pitman Training. During the course I learned how to maintain the purchase ledgers, process invoices and carry out a bank reconciliations. I am sure it gave me good background to step on the career ladder as a Purchase Ledger Clerk. I hope you will agree that this is a sound background for an entry level Purchase Ledger Clerk. I am assuming entry level here because you say "step on the career ladder."

I have enclosed my CV for your review. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to hearing from you and am available for an interview at your convenience.

  
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