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1- qualities of good doctor.

Doctor who someone take care well of all patients and give them a hope for recovery. Doctors are important people in the community and they should posses several good qualities.

First of all, a good doctor is somebody who cares of people and not just for the income. A good doctor always listens to his/her patient problems and take time to get know their patients. Good doctors deal with their patients amiably or humanly. In addition, characteristics of discipline and probity must found in good doctors. For example, they should always come on time to work and do their tasks. Faithful doctors strictly observe all the laws and regulations of the career. Good doctor have to give their best for the patient with mind, heat and soul. As well, a good doctor must be responsible and dependable. He / she must be at the right time when someone need him/her and give all the best they have for their patient wholeheartly. Above of all, a good doctor has to be knowledgeable and skillful in his/her career. Good doctors must be able to put their tools for good use. For instance, they must hear all that the patient tells with their ears. They ought to see that entire patient shows with their eyes. They must feel all that is hidden from patient with their hands. Doctors must detect all that is unspoken with their mind. When all this information has been assimilated, they must use their mouths to tell patients their thoughts to reassure them.  

The career of doctors is a great job because they take care of people and their health. Also, doctors are very important people in all communities and play an important role in the life. Thus they should posses good qualities.   

 2- Ways to get good grades.

None of us likes to get low grades in school, but us we know every diligent has portion. We alweyas reward of our action. There are several keys and ways to get good grades.

First of all, a student must have characteristics of discipline in order to get good grades. For example, a student should come on time in class, if not early. They should attend all lectures because by cutting classes a student won't be able to understand several subjects well. As well, a student must cover all the materials along time before the exam and avoid staying awake at the night of the exam. Also, a student must pay all his/her attention to the lecture when he /she is explain and a student ought to write an impotents notes. Moreover, don’t be sham to ask teacher any question that is unclear for you. By shyness a person will never learn. In addition, one of the traits a student needs to get a good grade is to be responsible. He/she should never delay their tasks such as writing homework and read ahead textbook. Also, students must know how to budget their time efficiently. Above of all, students need to be sedulous and hard worker to get good grade. They should always do things without being told: they don’t wait for assignments or a teacher before they prepare in textbook. Also, students must concentrate on their studies and don’t let any thing else interrupt them during study time. Students have to put for themselves a schedule of studying and then follow it as much as possible. A students needs to do more practices to make sure that he/she is familiar with subjects. Most of us find doing exercises is boring, but it is the best way to know how much we learned or progressed.

As I said, getting good grades requires a lot of efforts and perseveres. Those who sow flowers or roses will not earn thorns.  

4 -describing hometown

Hometown is the place that we living in and we grow up in this place. The places we live in express our cultures and habits. We usually affect from the place we live in. The people dress, the way they speak and the types of food they like. 

My neighborhood is fantastic. It is located around Barka suq near the beach. The environment in my neighborhood is excellent. For example, the weather is cold in the morning. It is cold because, it is near the beach. In addition, in my neighborhood several services are being offered. For instance, there are some petrol stations. There are two near AL-kafya shopping center and another one is in front of business firms, exactly behind Safeer shop. As well, there are several big shopping centers, where you can find what you need. There are some after Barka round-bouts and others across the Barka suq. There are two big mosques, one is next to the Halwa factory and another one is near the suq, behind the library shop. In my hometown, there many restaurants. There are some inside the suq and some near the houses. Furthermore, the system of transportation is reasonable. Roads are good as public transport. There two travel agencies. One is near the bank Muscat and another one is after Barka round-bouts, near the   cell shop. But unfortunately, the taxis services are dreadful. It is difficult to find taxi. In addition, my hometown characterize by peaceful. It is less polluted and less crime. There are not too much noise and few cars. Also, there are some wonderful places that tourists frequent them between period and another. Like, beach, fort and shopping centers. The most think that I like in my neighborhood is the people who live in. they are very friendly and helpful. They are always ready to help. They often help each other and share in all occasions together.

Finally, we have our good memories in our hometown and childhood friends are our nearer friends. It is imperative to develop warm convivial social relationship with our neighbors. We resort to them when we face problem, they share us in all type occasions. These are something about my hometown.  

4-describe school.