Part of application letter, please review

This is part of application letter for a traineeship opportunity. I only needed 15+ lines of explanation why did I choose certain department, not entire motivation letter. If someone could read and critique it, I would much appreciate it!

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Among the broad range of interests that arose during my time as a student of economic and philosophy university, macroeconomics and finance unquestionably distinct themselves the most. What begun as zealous study of the macroeconomic history as well as of the up to date macroeconomic issues, under guidance of professor Bicanic, was further broadened by the knowledge of European Union’s specific macroeconomic issues through the participation in the classes and research of professor Jovancevic.
That being said, the choice of Council of Europe Development Bank among other departments was rather straightforward.
I believe that the traineeship in the Council of Europe Development Bank would be no less then the matchless step forward in my professional development. This is due to the several facts: first, somewhere along the evolution of my macroeconomic focus, the European Union issues have separated themselves from all other interest domains and now definitely take a very special place, making them likely to retain my attention in years to come. Second set of reasons lies in the traineeship opportunity itself – this kind of experience could be of crucial importance to my career development and can not, really, be attained by any other means in this point in my life.
However, it would be wrong to think that all the benefits should be expected on my side alone – I am confident that I will be of much use as a trainee in the Council of Europe Development Bank. Immense enthusiasm, exceptional working habits and perhaps even professional competence are here to secure that.

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TNX!!

Yes, it helps a lot, tnx!

Sentence you are referring to is there because this entire writing
is actually answer to the question why have i chosen certain
department to perform traineeship in.

here's the updated version:

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Among the broad range of interests that arose during my time as a student of economics and philosophy at University, macroeconomics and finance unquestionably distinct themselves the most.

What begun as zealous study of the macroeconomic history as well as of the current macroeconomic issues, under guidance of professor Bicanic, was heightened by the knowledge of European Union’s specific macroeconomic issues through the participation in the classes and research of professor Jovancevic.

That being said, the choice of Council of Europe Development Bank among the other departments was rather straightforward.

Furthermore, I believe that a traineeship in the Council of Europe Development Bank could be a major step in my professional development. This is due to the several facts: first, somewhere along the evolution of my macroeconomic focus, the European Union has set itself apart from all the other interest domains and now definitely takes a very special place, making it likely to retain my attention in years to come. Most importantly, however is the traineeship opportunity itself – such a unique training experience could be of a crucial importance to my career development and could hardly be attained in any other way.

However, it would be wrong to think that all the benefits should be expected on my side alone – I am confident that I will be a valuable asset as a trainee in the Council of Europe Development Bank. Immense enthusiasm and well-developed sense of professional behavior are here to secure that.

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i didn't change it much since it is really not a motivation letter or something
like that but and answer to a specific question. I’m mostly worried about "a"-s and "the"-s,
i was never very good at that (as can probably be seen)

Ok, tnx... i changed most of it so now it's more or less the way you suggested it
the first time

That being said, my choice of Council of Europe Development Bank among the other departments was rather straightforward – traineeship in Council of Europe Development Bank is likely to grant me a valuable experiences in the field that has my attention now and is likely to retain it in years to come.

Given my special interest in the macroeconomics of the European Union, it seemed self-evident to me that the Council of Europe Development Bank should be my first choice for a traineeship. Were I to be accepted, I believe that I would gain invaluable experience for my future career.

Hi Guest,

Family history is a bit specialised, but there are lots of sites on the web. I got about 450 hits by typing

Jovancevic

into the search bar. You might want to try that.

Good luck