this is my personal statement. i 'm not sure about it especially the 5th paragragh.
thank you very much for any help!!!
As a senior majored in business Administration, I have been exposed systematically to concepts and theories of every aspect of management such as logistic, marketing and human resource management. I am now applying for acceptance into your MSc program of Management, Economics and Consumer Studies because I want to be trained in modern business theories and practice. I believe that holding a master’s degree of your school is the key for the door of success.
I am in the state of being maximum energetic, doing my best for a promising future. Throughout four years in university, I had an interest in participating in student activities as well as class-room learning. One such activity in which I took part in was the donation for Red Across Association. I was an executive member of this organization where I directed events such as getting touch with Red Across, assigning the donation collection, distribution and transporting as well. My duties within this organization included managing our budget, supervising the actions of volunteers, and making preparations with regards to facilities and transportation. For me, this extracurricular involvement was very important because it was the very first time in which I was able to act as a manager!
My study process was not roses all the way; however I struggled to overcome all handicaps and won finally. Students in our school have to choose whether to take part in A-level or B- level class in math. Although I was not good at math, I chose the A-level, the harder one; because I know it is one of the most important subjects for students majored in management. Unfortunately, I failed at the final examination of math that semester. The feeling of disappointed defeated and helpless suddenly came hourly. A senior advised me to ask the professor pass me through the back door. But the telephone numbers were so hard for me to press at that time, when my father’s face constantly obtruded, smiling at me. His eyes glittered with encouraging. The ray of light tinged my fingers and pushed me handed up the phone. I dropped the chance of makeup and told my tutor that I would like to study math again so that I can master the mathematic knowledge. My professor quite supported me for my preciseness. Not only did he give me lots of encourage but also analyze the cause of my failure. He suggested me to do my lessons before and after classes and spent more time in self-studying. Everything comes to him who waits. I passed the exam of A-level course. And now, when I reflect on those days, I realize that since I can tackle the difficulty in math, I won’t be afraid of any other obstacles no matter in future study nor life.
Besides academic study and activity, I was send to the youth palace learning folk dancing when I was 6 years old; I really liked this activity because all the teachers would like to pick me up as the principal dancer. Whirled across the stage to the music gave me the sense that I was the most elegant one among all the girls. I started learning sketching when I was 12, my father even sent me to the China University of Art to have some training. Although I lost the stage, magnesium light and applause, I got a quiet space for drawing along, tasting the joys and fascination from another aesthetics. I have to say that dancing gave me confidence and taught me how to work in a team, and drawing shaped my taste of esthetics as well as the virtue of patience. When I was a high school student, I was appointed as an art editor for our school magazine. During that period, with the assistance of some friends and teachers, I organized picture shows. Like any one who fascinated with art, I am absolutely mad about the art of advertisement. Apart from these, being impressed by my father, I love music, especially playing musical instruments. All of these have greatly influenced my romantic and preciseness personality.
A question that I often ask myself is "What shall I do to make sure reaching my goals?" Having these goals will help motivate me to do something. The goal in front of me is to acquire the kind of education that will enable me to contribute to the development of business studies in my native land as an instructor in university. To achieve this, I believe that I should hold a master’s degree before I have the ability to pursuit a doctor’s.
Personally, I feel that I am a strong leader and shall be able to communicate well with people. I take pleasure in working one on one with individuals, but also in working in a group effort. I am persistent when needed, and I am confident in myself. I am excited about finishing school and being able to start my career in marketing. I have no doubt that I will persevere and be successful.