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Latest post Fri, Jun 9 2006 8:06 AM by Antonija. 2 replies.
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Antonija  +  233941 Thu, 08 Jun 06 06:01 PM

Hello,

Can you please check it?

You can choose a producer of the engine and its power, as well as colour and the materials for the interior and give a personal touch that makes you feel at home.

 

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Grammar Geek  +  233947 Thu, 08 Jun 06 06:26 PM

How about:

You can choose the engine manufacturer and power, ... interior to give your boat that personal touch to make make you feel at home.

When I first read it, I thought you got to choose the power of the producer, which if course doesn't make any sense. But it still made me read it twice.

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Barbara, who answers in American English. My housekeeping skills attest to the truth of the second law of thermodynamics: Left to themselves, things get more and more random!
Antonija, 3 yr 169 days ago
Thanks for your corrections, Grammar Geek.
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