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zakineo  #522062  Mon, 02 Jun 08 03:11 PM
 Hello everbody i am a new member and this is my second message,so i salute you all, i have some problemes due to my poor english in writing a Phd motivation letter that i want to send directly to proffessors, i will be thankfull for your suggestions and i m sending you a letter that i have written and i need somone to see the corrections needed. thank you for this great space .

Dear Sir

The purpose of this letter is not only to describe my educational and professional background, but also to focus your attention on how motivated I am to start PhD programme in [] offered by your laboratory at [].

 

I graduated with an Master's Research Degree in Computer Science, Telecommunication and Engineering from the National Higher School of Computer Science and Systems Analysis at Mohammed V University (the first engineering school in Morocco), in 2004 I obtained a Bachelor's in Computer Science at the faculty of science of Mohammed V University in Rabat and in 2002 I finished a university degree in Mathematics and physics in Mohammed I university in Oujda.

 

Actually I am working as a Networking engineer in Morocco Telecommunication after nearly 1 year in Alcatel-Lucent working as an Intelligent Networks Engineer at Moroccan R&D research centre, and I am preparing myself to pursue a PhD in [].   

The master of research I’ve studied was a preparation for multidisciplinary research, based on physics, electronics, mathematical, and computational background. We were introduced to gain insight into research works in several topics of engineering; information theory, telecommunication and other fields. And I was always capable of providing an intense effort of adaptation and learning to successfully manipulate new notions and techniques.

 

I am Aware of the challenge represented by choosing [] in terms of need for adaptation to new tools and manners of research; however I believe in my ability and will to point my scientific background and experience in such a multidisciplinary and promising research area, a choice that fits best my objectives and ambitions.

 

As [] University has important research activities in this area, I would like to be given the opportunity to be one of its prestigious research groups. I am sure that my passion to computer science related research fields, along with my skills, knowledge and competence would make me a valuable member of your research team, Hence I would appreciate if you consider my application for developing a PhD under your supervision.

 

I am at your service for further information and clarifications, and I look forward to hearing from you.

  
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Mr Wordy  #522212  Mon, 02 Jun 08 11:58 PM
A few suggestions below. Good luck! 

The purpose of this letter is not only to describe my educational and professional background, but also to focus your attention on how motivated I am to start join the PhD programme in [] offered by your laboratory at [].

In [date], I graduated with an a Master's Research Degree in Computer Science, Telecommunications [?] and Engineering from the National Higher School of Computer Science and Systems Analysis at Mohammed V University (the first [if you mean "first" in terms of status then it would probably be better to say "leading"] engineering school in Morocco). In 2004 I obtained a Bachelor's Degree in Computer Science at the Faculty of Science of Mohammed V University in Rabat, and in 2002 I finished completed a university degree in Mathematics and physics Physics in at Mohammed I university in Oujda.

Actually Currently I am working as a Networking Engineer in for Morocco Telecommunication after nearly 1 a year in Alcatel-Lucent working as an Intelligent Networks Engineer at Alcatel-Lucent's Moroccan R&D research centre. and I am preparing myself to pursue a PhD in [].   

The master of research I’ve studied My Master's Degree was a preparation for multidisciplinary research based on in physics, electronics, and mathematical and computational background disciplines. We were introduced to gain I gained an insight into research works in several topics  areas of engineering, information theory, telecommunications and other fields. And I was always capable of providing an intense effort of adaptation and learning to successfully manipulate new notions and techniques. I also demonstrated my capacity for hard work and my ability to successfully master new concepts and techniques.

I am aware of the challenge represented by choosing [], in terms of the need for adaptation to new tools and manners of research techniques; however I believe in my ability and will to point my scientific background and experience in such a multidisciplinary and promising research area as an indication a that this choice that best fits best my objectives and ambitions.

As [] University has important research activities in this area, I would like to be given the opportunity to be join one of its prestigious research groups. I am sure that my passion to for computer science and related research fields, along with my skills, knowledge and competence would make me a valuable member of your research team. Hence I would appreciate it if you would consider my application for developing to study for a PhD under your supervision.

I am at your service for further information and clarifications, and I look forward to hearing from you.

  
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zakineo  #522899  Wed, 04 Jun 08 11:56 AM
 thank you a lot you helped me enormously.

 

  
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