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User_gary  #415536  Fri, 07 Sep 07 03:44 PM

The screen in the TV not showing the picture well, I think some cable might have become loose.

The TV screen is not showing the film properly. Perhaps, some problem in the TV channel provider.

The picture in the TV screen is not proper. I think some problem with the cable, may be the cable which comes from Channel provider loose.

Please correct my sentences.

If possible, use more common words and appropriate words in the above sentences and make them tweaks.

I welcome if you also give me a new version of what I intend.

  
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Clive  #415561  Fri, 07 Sep 07 06:01 PM

Hi,

The screen in the TV not showing the picture well, I think some cable might have become loose.

The TV screen is not showing the film properly. Perhaps, some problem in the TV channel provider.

The picture in the TV screen is not proper. I think some problem with the cable, may be the cable which comes from Channel provider loose.

We say these things idiomatically, thus -

The  TV does not have a good picture. I think some cable might have (be)come loose.

The TV does not have good reception. Perhaps there is some problem with the signal.  The idea is that your TV receives a signal from the TV station.

Best wishes, Clive

  
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