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BW2/3  #295111  Sun, 19 Nov 06 11:48 AM

I thank Incho and Yoong Liat  for your compliments. I don't think I have any talents to write good stories. The one above may be one in thousands.

I would like to improve my grammar and writing skills.  

Will you guys help me to fix my ungrammatical errors? I think you guys work very hard on improving your grammars so I could benefit from your effort.  

Your help is greatly appreciated.

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Yoong Liat  #295122  Sun, 19 Nov 06 12:28 PM

Every member will help you if he or she is able to answer your question/s. If you have the inspiration to write another story, please do so.

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Believer  #295397  Mon, 20 Nov 06 07:57 AM

Hello,

You hope you don't mind me taking a dab at it.

The dirt pigs in the barnyard all have disc-like snouts and run nimbly. They knee?? on their hind legs when they eat. The pigs can smell me from a long distance and hear me coming, but unfortunately have poor vision. They could not see me eventhough I stand very near. They are not only smart but also, are fascinating creatures. They share a common characteristic which is that  they usually eat all kinds of food just like us humans. They are not as filthy as you think; they sometimes cover themselves in dirt to protect themselves from harsh sun rays. Their daily routine is to eat, sleep, mate, and walk around the barnyard. They are  greedy like  no other animals I have seen. Sometimes they fight for food. One thing that I don't like about them is their snorting -- I can't stand it. I cannot bear hearing it. I like how they go 'oink, oink and oink'. Every year the pigs produce a lot of offsprings for our benefit. When they do, my parent sell them in the street market which is a mile from our farm. The street market has all kinds of pig meat and they are fresh because there are no modern appliances such as refrigerators to keep the meat from going bad.    

Please correct this if you are willing. 

  
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