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BW2/3

#294809 Sat, 18 Nov 06 01:56 PM

The dirt pigs in the barnyard all have disc-like snouts, running nimbly. They knee their hind legs when they eat. The pigs can smell me out from a long distance, as well as hear me coming, but they have poor vision. The pigs could not see me even though I stand very close to them. The pigs are not only smart also fascinating creatures. They share a common which is they almost eat all kinds of food just like our human being. The pigs are not filthy as you think. Sometimes they cover themselves with dirt from sunscreen. Every day their jobs are to eat, to sleep, to mate, and to walk around in the barnyard. My pigs are greedy as I have never seen any animals like that. Sometimes they fight for food. One thing that I don't like to hear from them is when they snort. I cannot bear to hear it. I like the way they talk when they say 'oink, oink, and oink’. Every year the pigs produce a lot of piglets for my family. Then my parent sell them to the street market where a mile from our farm. The street market has all kinds of ping meat. Moreover they are fresh because the community here has no modern appliances such as refrigerator.

Are they correct?

Thank you

BW2/3

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Carpe diem!!

Inchoateknowledge

#294820 Sat, 18 Nov 06 02:18 PM

"Are they correct?" Why? Are you the author or you do not trust the source? Wink [;)]

By the way, I like the stories you post.

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BW2/3

#294824 Sat, 18 Nov 06 02:21 PM

Thank you Incho,

I just made it up. Would you or someone else kindly proofread my story?

Your help is greatly appreciated.

Big Smile [:D]

BW2/3

Inchoateknowledge

#294837 Sat, 18 Nov 06 02:53 PM

The dirt pigs in the barnyard, WHICH all have disc-like snouts, ARE running nimbly. They knee ON their hind legs when they eat. The pigs can smell me out from a long distance, as well as hear me coming, but they have poor vision. The pigs CAN not see me even IF I stand very close to them. The pigs are not only smart BUT also fascinating creatures. IN common WITH EACHOTHER, they almost eat ANY (=WHICHEVER) kind(s) of food, just like HUMANS. The pigs are CLEAN, JUST AS YOU WOULD NOT EXPECT. Sometimes they cover themselves with dirt from sunscreen??. THEIR DAILY ROUTINES ARE eatING, sleepING, AND matING. THEY HAVE THE RUN OF the WHOLE barnyard. mY PIGS ARE GREEDY LIKE NOTHING ON EARTH. Sometimes they fight for food. ONE OF THE MOST ANNOYING SOUND THEY GIVE OUT IS WHEN THEY snort. I cannot bear to LISTEN TO it. I like the way they talk, when they say, "'oink', 'oink', and 'oink'".

NICE QUOTATION

YOU ARE FUNNY

Every year the pigs produce a lot of piglets for my family. Then my parentS sell them AT the MARKET (where) a mile AWAY from our farm. THERE YOU CAN GET ALL KINDS OF PORK MEAT. Moreover, they are fresh because the FOLKS here haVE no refrigerator.?

BW2/3 , YOU MANAGED TO CHEER ME UP NO END.