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safeer  #465803  Fri, 18 Jan 08 12:21 PM

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Clive  #466243  Sat, 19 Jan 08 04:15 PM

Hi Safeer,

I think that no-one wants to reply because you have too may sentences here. It's also very confusing when you don't write ech sentence on a separate line. It makes it hard to read.

I'm just going to correct your first one..

I want a girl is cooking good and her knowledge. I want a girl who can cook well and who has good knowledge.

Do you have any questions about this? Would you like to try to write a few more sentences like this one?

Best wishes, Clive

  
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