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Latest post Sat, Sep 5 2009 10:31 PM by ferdis. 1 replies.
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Anonymous  +  888397 Sat, 05 Sep 09 08:42 PM
I really need to know wheather my grammer is correct or no?

I think it's a female zebra spider (Salticus scenicus), since it has really large eyes in the front in order to spot the prey and uses its jumping ability to capture it. This kind of spider is usually black covered with white stripes. The most interesting thing about the zebra spiders, which amaze me, their awareness of the observing viewer (or of being observed is better?). Thus, if you take a close look of one of them, it will lift its head as a respond and look straight back at you, which is obvious in both pictures you took!

ferdis  +  888498 Sat, 05 Sep 09 10:31 PM
A quick edit gives this:

 

I think it's a female zebra spider (Salticus scenicus) [no comma] since it has really large eyes in the front in order to spot the prey and uses its jumping ability to capture prey [repeated 'it' is ambiguous]. This kind of spider is usually black and covered with white stripes. The most interesting thing about the zebra spiders, which amazes me, is their awareness of being observed. Thus, if you take a close look of at one of them, it will [removing will works better with the 'and' later on] lifts its head as a respond in response and looks straight back at you --- which is obvious in both pictures you took!

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