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Anonymous  #520901  Fri, 30 May 08 02:45 PM
The goods for HX4356 was inspected today, but only 1740 pcs, and 120 pcs were affected by shortages. In order to catch the vessel closing tomorrow, please send a guarantee letter to us to make sure the remaining quantities are the same as the golden sample and quality is in good condition
  
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Mister Micawber  #521100  Sat, 31 May 08 12:44 AM
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The goods for HX4356 were inspected today, but only 1740 pcs and 120 pcs [This does not make sense; which is the correct number?]were short. In order to catch the vessel closing tomorrow, please send a guarantee letter to us to make sure the remaining quantities are the same as the golden sample and quality is good.


PS:  It is unreasonable to expect all items to be the same as the golden sample.
  
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Anonymous  #521108  Sat, 31 May 08 12:58 AM

Hi Mr. Micawber,

How about this revision : The goods for HX4356 were inspected today, only 1740 pcs passed, but 120 pcs were short

Thanks for review it again

  
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