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Latest post Wed, Jan 16 2008 3:45 PM by Avangi. 1 replies.
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Bird Of Paradise  +  464950 Wed, 16 Jan 08 01:22 PM

                       

Please check the following experience certificate for any errors. Thanks.

  TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN

This is to certify that Mr. Masroor Sher Khan ID.# 6268 has worked in the capacity of Driver Heavy Equipment at Al Qussie Int. Cont. Est. w.e.f.  12-14-2005  to 10-01-2007.             

             During his stay in the company we found him extremely hardworking, cooperative and punctual. The company owes him for the meritorious services which he has rendered to it. In view of  his proficiency and deep knowledge with ample experience in the mentioned field, he will always be a valuable asset for whichever company he joins.

we wish him every success in life.
Bird Of Paradise
Joined on Thu, Feb 15 2007
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I would appreciate it if anyone would correct my grammar mistakes if there are any. ( Even in this sentence.) TO THINE OWN SELF BE TRUE,
Avangi  +  465004 Wed, 16 Jan 08 03:45 PM

Suggestions:

Heavy Equipment Driver  (I don't understand "Cont.Est.w.e.f.")   Do we need a "from" before the first date?

For the second sentence in the middle paragraph, how about:  "The company is indebeted to him for his meritorious services."

In view if his experience, proficiency, and deep knowledge in the field of heavy equipment operation, - - - - - - -  to whatever company he joins.

in life seems a little excessive.
Avangi
Joined on Mon, Nov 19 2007
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