Someone edited my work. I am just wondering if his corrections are correct. Please see words highlighted in yellow:
1. Three
poor little rabbits sat at the kitchen table one starry night. Their clothes
were all covered in chocolate and cookie dough – it was way past their bedtime. - (Before, it did not have 'their'. I don't know why he edited me.)
2. Their names are Twinkle, Astro, and Crystal, and they were
having so much fun. They played with wooden spoons and measuring cups like the
evening had just
begun! (The original is "the evening
has just begun," since this is an action that recently happened.)
3. She brought
her telescope and walked excitedly to spy on all the glittering stars that shine so
brightly. (This used to be
spy out. I chose "spy out" to mean "to observe" because
spy on means "to secretly observe".)
Hope you can shed some light.
Thank you very much.