[title]Family quotes[/title] [description]Welcome to our family quotes section! Here you'll find some of the funniest (and wisest) quotes on the subject of family life![/description]
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Latest post Tue, Dec 13 2005 7:36 PM by Anonymous. 2 replies.
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Peruviangirl  +  167845 Thu, 08 Dec 05 11:43 PM
The reason why I am writing this essay is because I really would like to attend the University of Georgia. I am the person who always thinls about her future, that is why I tried to make my best in high school, earning good grades and learning as much as I can to be well prepared for college. The quality I like best in myself is that I am always planning and thinking about my future to achieve all of my goals. One of the things I like the least about me is that sometimes I don't use good organization for my studies, but I will try to use better study skills to make my best at college.

   

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Sya_tesl  +  167896 Fri, 09 Dec 05 04:03 AM
well...i think your introductory para is suitable for the application...you have written all about your experiences and if i am one of their board...i think i will consider your application...but...it just from my own view...anyway....good luck for your future...bye...
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Hi guys!!!
Anonymous, 3 yr 349 days ago

Hi

    Your introduction paragraph is good, but you need thesis statement to make readers know what you are going to talk about. It's important sentence that you have to write in your introduction paragraph.

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