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Latest post Sun, Sep 28 2003 7:44 AM by nivea. 2 replies.
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nivea
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Sun, 28 Sep 03 07:44 AM
September 28, 2003,
Dear Dr xxx:
As the personal assistant of Chairman xxx, I already sent email to xxx website several times, unfortunately, we do not get any reply from xxx official organisation yet.
Since there is little time to due date, I am a little bit worry and wonder what is happening for these requiring letters. We already sent 4 photoes by attachment for security cards, meanwhile we hope them send the Invitation letter for this meeting.
Could you please to confirm whether or not everything is correct, if it is convenient to you to send Invitation letter by email or fax, we need use it as an important document for visa procedure urgently.
Looking forward to hear from you soon,
Yours sincerely,
Tele: xxx
Fax: xxx
E-mile:xxx
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jiaoqiang1
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Mon, 29 Sep 03 05:32 AM
Hi Nivea,
U've written a quite good letter except for a few grammatical errors. I reorganized some of the setences. The meaning has been changed a bit. If Dr xxx belong to the organisation, if so, the Dr will represent the organisation. you can use 'your organisation' to address the organisation. Second, are the photos included in those letters(emails)? I'm not sure whether my interpretation accords to your original intention. If not, you just change back to your original organisation.
As the personal assistant of Chairman xxx, I've already sent email to xxx website several times, however, we haven't gotten any reply from xxx official organisation yet.
Since there's little time to the due date, I'm a bit worried and very anxious to know what has happened to those enquiring letters. We have sent four photos through these emails' attachments for making security cards. Meanwhile, we hope to receive the invitation letter from you for this meeting through email or fax as soon as possible. We need it as an important document for visa application.
I look forward to hear from you soon.
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nivea,
6 yr 60 days ago
thank you very much.....
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