Hello,
it would help me a lot, if you would check my letter of motivation, because I am very unsure about my grammatical skills.
Dear Prof. *****,
The purpose
of writing this letter is the request that you consider my application for a
university place abroad for the academic year 2007/2008 at the University of *****.
I am
studying Business Administration and have finished the basic
study in the last term.
My major subjects are Communication Science, Marketing and Organizational and Social Psychology. At the moment I am attending basic courses in media and communication.
However I
think that it is connotatively to emerge and to broaden one’s mind. For this
reason I am actively engaged in the university club „***“ and the charitable organisation ***. And this reason
also contributed to my decision on going abroad.
I have always placed emphasis on applying
my theoretical knowledge in a real business practice. That’s why I took an internship at **** during the last semester
break. This placement enabled me to experience the
environment in a big international corporation as well as work on demanding
projects. Therefore I could develope my teamwork
and soft skills.
The term
abroad seems like the perfect opportunity to learn more about the British
culture and the advancement of the economics and the media of Great Britain. In
addition to it I would like to to meet other cultures,
experience other educational system and enrich my curriculum vitae, as well as
gain more independence.
The University of *** is offering a wide range of courses in the space of the Department of Journalism
Studies and the Department of Economics and appears to be
the perfect complement to my education.
Thank you very much for considering my
application. I look forward to your response.
Yours sincerely,