Dear all,
I am a new comer and I need your help.
Could anybody please help me to check and correct my letter of motivation?

Thank you very much. Marco
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Dear Recruitment Manager:>>

I write this letter with the intention of showing my interest and motivation in becoming selected to participate for four to twelve moth in one of yours Traineeship, beginning from April 2006. My name is ***, a dynamic and enthusiastic 23-year-old Swiss man who easily adapts to any situation. I am currently studying Economics at the University of *** (my major is ***). Now it’s time to use what I’ve learned, this Traineeship will enable me to gain work experience, which is currently lacking in my education. I’m very interested to be inserted in your Strategic Planning Pharma or Pharma Affaire Department.>>

From the information on your web site, I believe there would be a good fit between my skills, personality and interests and your needs. The opportunity to work with Novartis would be an exciting challenge. I am thrilled by the opportunity to join a group of professionals where I can apply my skills, talents, and enthusiasm. Novartis appeals to me because it has a great reputation as an international competitive company, further your vision of regarding people as the key for success also fascinates me. I am confident that with my strong motivation, my hard-working and practical attitude, and with the Traineeship at the Novartis Pharma AG to top it off, I will have a solid foundation for a successful and fulfilling career.>>

My resume, which is enclosed, contains additional information on my experience and skills. I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss the training program with you and to provide further information on my candidacy. >>

Thank you for your time and consideration.>>

Yours faithfully,>>

M.>>