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Hawa Tesl  #169662  Wed, 14 Dec 05 03:44 AM

                                                                                  MY LIFE

            My life begins when I was born in 3rd May 1987 in Kuala Terengganu.I am the youngest member in my family. I have 5 brothers and 5 sisters. I live in a simple family, which is not too rich or too poor. My childhood is like other kids.But the best moment in my childhood is when a stewardess praised me, "How cute you are". For me, it is nothing because what I have today not a permenant, it is only temporary. 

            When I was six years old, I went to the kindergarten which is located near to my house. I have a lot of friends when in the kindergarten stage. There are people who are kind, sweet and also the bad one. But, i enjoy my kindergaten life because i involved actively in the co-curicullar activities like dancing and singing.

              Standard one, i continued my study in Ladang Primary School whish also located near to my house.I often go to school by walking with my friends. I finished my study in that school untill the end of my standard six after the UPSR. I felt so sad because i am get only 3A and 2B.

               But i still continued my study to the Khairiah Islamic Secondary School untill the end of my PMR. I am so happy because i got 8A and 1B for the examination.It is out of my target. Then, with my great result I applied to study at the Mara Junior Science College. After the result, i got the answer and go to the Mara Junior Science College in Kuantan. I studied there only two years till my final examination in my school life.

               After the SPM, i applied to further study in many institutions but, i hard to get the best one only with my ordinary result. Luckily, i got the offer to further my study at KUSZA in Terengganu in the Diploma of Tesl. Before that, i got the offer to do medical course in Ukraine, but i refused it because  it is too far from my hometown. Untill now, i stay in KUSZA and try to finish my study here with all my friends.

               So, this is about all my life from my childhood untill now.I hope my life will continue smoothly and happy untill the end of my life in this world.

ATTENTION: PLEASE CHECK MY ESSAY FOR ME..I KNOW IT IS A LOT OF MISTAKE,BUT AS HUMAN WE MUST LEARN FROM OUR MISTAKES,RIGHT!!!

 

  
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Anonymous  #272277  Tue, 26 Sep 06 05:44 AM

Dear Hawa,

A good try anyway considering the fact that you did not get to do your education in the English medium.

Yes, there are mistakes eg. there are a lot of mistakes but as human beings... but the point is to keeping trying.

Best wishes.

  
Anonymous  #348377  Sun, 08 Apr 07 03:38 PM

     I am Brandon. My full name is Brandon Joannes. But you can call me Don. I am 10 years old and live in Tambunan, Sabah, Malaysia. I am the second old in my family because I have 1 sister, 2 younger sisters and a baby brother. I go to school every Monday to Friday. My school's name is Sekolah Rendah Jenis Kebangsaan (cina) Yuh Min Tambunan. I have many friends at my school like Aldo, Adrian, Dickson, Eric and many more.

    I can tell you more but I have to go now, see you later!!

  
Anonymous  #402750  Fri, 10 Aug 07 09:04 AM
Very Good, Indeed
  
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