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Latest post Mon, Dec 19 2005 3:54 PM by Vunguyen1985. 3 replies.
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Anonymous  +  170068 Thu, 15 Dec 05 09:19 AM

   Her name is Wan Latifah bt Wan Hussein.The most beautiful woman i ever known.She got all the criteria as a perfect woman. She has the beauty,inner and outside.She has a work that very suits her, she has a man that she loves the most and mostly she has the children who loves her more than anyone else except my mother.

   My mother came from a poor family, she grows up in a broken family, her parents divorced and her sister and she lived with their mother. She got her first education at English School and she was one of the best student there. When she was in final year of studying, she had fall in love with a man, her own teacher who is my father. It was love at the first sight. My father is amazed by her beautyness.

   She has a very perfect oval shape faces and it looks perfect with her nose.She has not a very sharp pointed noise and not also round. Her nose is a very good one to the pure malay like her.She has a very small lips and a thin eyebrow. The most special things she has is her eyes.It is light brown same with the hottest bollywood stars eyes,Shah Rukh Khan.She has fair and clear smooth skins.She has a small size,not a very tall woman    

Mister Micawber  +  170089 Thu, 15 Dec 05 10:35 AM

Some notes:

Is bt correct?
The first period should be a comma
Capitalize the pronoun I
she has all the criteria of
inner and outer
work is a non-count noun
very cannot modify verbs
She grew up
one of the best students
the final year
she fell in love
love at first sight
beautyness is not a word
Malay is capitalized
very small lips and thin eyebrows
They are light brown
Bollywood is capitalized
Skin is uncountable

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TammyBaby  +  170759 Sat, 17 Dec 05 10:26 AM
I think you have one more mistake

The most beautiful woman I have ever known.
She has/has got all...

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Vunguyen1985  +  171821 Mon, 19 Dec 05 03:54 PM
her name is Wan Latifah bt wan Hussein .She is one of the most beautiful woman that I've ever met.She has all the criteria of the perfect woman.She is beautiful, inner and outside.she has a job that she is love .She has a man who almost loves her every time and she has the children who love her more than anyone else except my mother
My mother came from a poor family. She grew up in a broken family. Because her parents divorced , she and her sister had to live with their mother .The first school she came is English school where she was one of the best student.When she was in final year of studing , she had falll in love with a man...............

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