Bbmak  +  252199 Fri, 04 Aug 06 07:35 AM I am doing a self evaluation on my presentation that i did last week. please check my grammar here. If you have any suggestion to make these sentences better, please feel free to comment. ================================================== The class’s feedback was very helpful to me because they actually pointed out my weakness. Most of the groups said one common thing to me. When I was delivering the presentation in the class, I was talking too fast and not having enough eye-contact with the audience. They suggested me that I need to relax, talk slower, and keep eye contact with the audience because I seemed like that I was reciting everything. Most of the groups said that I have good visual aids and well organized presentation, and I agree with them because I have devoted a lot of time in organization and visual aids. ================================================= thank you very much for checking the sentences. Bbmak Joined on Thu, Jun 22 2006 New Member 16 Grammar

	Mister Micawber  +  252201 Fri, 04 Aug 06 07:41 AM The class’s feedback was very helpful to me because they actually pointed out my weakness. Most of the groups said one common thing to me. When I was delivering the presentation in the class, I was talking too fast and not having enough eye contact with the audience. They suggested to me that I need to relax, talk slower, and keep eye contact with the audience because I seemed like I was reciting everything. Most of the groups said that I had good visual aids and a well-organized presentation, and I agree with them because I have devoted a lot of time to organization and visual aids. Mister Micawber Joined on Wed, Aug 4 2004 Yokohama Veteran Member 30,807 'The question is,' said Humpty Dumpty, 'which is to be master-- that's all.' Grammar