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IMTB  #379559  Thu, 14 Jun 07 06:07 PM
hey guys im applying for an english program. i would appreciate it very much if you take a look at my letter.

i know its kind of long but what's important and what's not.... well, thank you in advance..


With my birth in Russia my internationally career was introduced.  It conducted me to Germany and from there in various countries of Europe. Now it’s time to boost my internationally career up to a new level. And the Netherlands are predestined for this matter with their unique distinguished education system. And at the peak of it appears your Institute. I’m truly convinced that the “*** program” will redefine my international career. Therefore I want to apply for a place in your “*** program”.

After my regular graduation I decided to specialize with commercial and languages. Thus, I participated to a special program of a Commercial College at the Berufskolleg Neuss. The name of the program is European Business Class and the emphases are commercial, languages and informatics. After the first year of the commercial college, I accomplished an internship at the finance company LBS. Over 3 weeks competent knowledge in finance, responsibly working and dealing with customers were added to my capabilities.

In order of the focus languages I performed an internship in England at the company Association of Charity Shops for two weeks. At this Internship, I’ve gained experience from all aspects of this company and interacting with English speaking people. To enhance my higher education I determined to execute an internship by the renowned advertising agency BBDO. This Internship taught me to perform responsibly affairs by my own and under pressure. Furthermore, many huge in-house projects took place with my attendance.

I am a very serious, goal-oriented individual motivated to evolve constantly and to equip myself with the knowledge and power to succeed in the future. One of my goals is to be capable to work in different departments of an international company. Furthermore, I desire the opportunity to work with people from all kind of cultures. And your institution with one’s Modern didactical principles provides broad education in various functions. Additionally, I admire the fact that the training stuff is available for counseling and guidance throughout the studies and also a study career supervisor. It exhibits that you care about welfare and success of your students. On account of this, I’m convinced with a bachelor degree acquired at your institution, I will be able to meet my expectation and desires.

Studying the “***” program requires necessary motivation, further train, develop yourself independently, flexibility, practical approach, and being open minded. The commercial college and my several internships have transformed me into a cosmopolitan and multi-lingual aptitude person in commercial affairs. Moreover, the internship in England has acknowledged my special abilities to work and communicate with the English language. Overall, my educational career has taught me that it’s essential to always stay positive and to work hard for the goals you have set yourself.

Going through your brochure I caught up the contribution by Lonneke Hendrix and find it very impressive. It affirmed me in my conception and my ardent desire to study at your institution. Moreover I’ve obtained by the brochure, that you apply the Major-Minor Model, which I consider as an excellent way to study.

My independence and full responsibility for myself have driven me to a higher level of maturity than many of my peers, a quality that differentiates me from many other applicants.

 
I can make myself available for an interview at your convenience. And if you have additional questions don’t hesitate to get in touch with me.  Thank you for your time and consideration.


  
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IMTB  #382153  Wed, 20 Jun 07 04:47 PM
well seems like the letter is perfect Wink [;)]
  
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