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Creativeguru  #509684  Mon, 05 May 08 08:04 AM

Women have always been a driving force in their homes – making the world a better place for their families and children, who continue to improve our quality life. An interior designer and an architect by profession at Elements, both women, not only strive to offer the best design and the finest spacious drawers, but all your appliance needs also. After all, designing beautiful kitchen which meet all your needs is not our business, it’s our tradition. “Seeing is believing.” Isn’t it? So just give us a call.

  
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26TMNTJG2PG  #509770  Mon, 05 May 08 12:58 PM

Women have always been a driving force in their homes – making the world a better place for their families and children; and they continue to improve our quality life. An interior designer and an architect by profession at Elements, both women, not only strive to offer the best designs and the finest spacious drawers, but also attend to all your appliance needs. After all, designing beautiful kitchens which meet all your needs is not our business. It’s our tradition. “Seeing is believing.” Isn’t it? So just give us a call.

  
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Creativeguru  #509774  Mon, 05 May 08 01:05 PM

Thanks 26TMNT for your help

  
New2grammar  #509775  Mon, 05 May 08 01:12 PM

Is it more idiomatic to say "the quality of life"?

 

both women, not only strive to ...Is a verb missing here? maybe "DO not only...but also"

designing beautiful kitchen , Also, kitchen is a countable noun, so I think an article is missing.

  
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Creativeguru  #509801  Mon, 05 May 08 01:45 PM

Valuable point wanting for others to comment

  
26TMNTJG2PG  #510296  Tue, 06 May 08 11:54 AM

not only strive to offer ..............., but also attend to all your appliance needs.

beautiful kitchens not necessary to be preceded by an article.

  
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