 El-kayser wrote: |
Modern Technology We are on thresholds of a new era which is full of modern inventions. So, we have to apply modern technology in all fields of life. We should be careful that because modern technology is a double-edged weapon sword. One the one hand, it has many potentialities which a lot of potential to help man to lead a comfortable and luxurious life. It also has beneficial fruits - not a good word. For example, in the field of medicine, many medical instruments such as X-ray machine have been produced - moved this which has have - refers to machines the ability to diagnose and treat many curable diseases as well as lasers rays. In the field of agriculture, it has helped farmers to save many months of hard work. Moreover, it has helped scientists to save so many years of hard work, research and experiments. On the other hand, it has made man lazier than before. He no longer uses his legs after inventing cars. He also, no comma here no longer uses his hands after inventing remote sets. This one is not a good example. In addition, to that it - use "technology" instead of "it" has managed - not a good word choice man to produce destructive weapons and weapons of mass destructive ones. To sum up, we have to use modern technology in construction ways instead of destruction ones. If that can be done, there is no limit to the progress of human race. |
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"save many months of hard work" and "save so many years of hard work" don't really work. What did you mean to say?
It's not common to use "he" to refer to all of mankind any longer, and it can be considered sexist to refer to "man" these days instead of "people."
If you need another example to replace the one with the remote - which is NOT a good choice - consider how people interact with each other now instead of how they did in ages past.