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Anonymous  #535786  Wed, 02 Jul 08 01:25 PM
My name is Kwanruean Somphanphae. My nickname is L.
I am 19 years old. I live in Bangkok,Thailand. I have 3 brothers.
And I have the best friends 2 person. Her name is Tik and Aom.
I like to shopping at JJ. Market because it is very cheap.
4 years ago I learned at Siam Business Administration college major in foreign language.
And then I studying at Chandrakasem Rajabhat University major in Business English.
When I graduation I want to be air hostess. Because I like to meet people and I love to travel.
But I am short. It is impossible. Finally I want to speak English excellent.
  
Feebs11  #536456  Fri, 04 Jul 08 12:00 AM

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My name is Kwanruean Somphanphae. My nickname is L.
I am 19 years old. I live in Bangkok,Thailand. I have three brothers.
And I have the best friends 2 person. Her name is Tik and Aom.  two good friends who are Tik and Aom.
I like to shopping shop at JJ. Market because it is very cheap.
Four years ago I learned studied at Siam Business Administration College with a  major in foreign language.
And then Now I am studying at Chandrakasem Rajabhat University with a major in Business English.
When I graduation graduate I want to be air hostess because I like to meet people and I love to travel.
But I am short. It is impossible. Finally I want to speak English excellent.properly/really well
 
  
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