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thomas_sp  #82216  Fri, 18 Mar 05 07:17 PM
Hi Guys,

Please help me to check my writing:

"Dear Valued Members,

Due to huge transactions that has been made by our members
from Tuesday, March 02,2004 since Friday, March 02, 2005,
Our Group decide to increase minimum investment and decrease bonus of each
investment plan, Please login to your account to find new values of each investment plan,

Best Regards,
Thomas Leong"

Awaiting to hearing from you soon,

Thanks,
Thomas
  
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MrPedantic  #82239  Fri, 18 Mar 05 11:49 PM
Welcome to EF, Thomas!



Dear Member

As a result of the high volume of transactions made by members between 2 March 2004 and 2 March 2005, Our Group has decided to increase the minimum investment and ?decrease bonus in each investment plan.

Please log in to your account to find the new value of each investment plan.

Best regards

TL


Can you explain 'decrease bonus'?

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