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Latest post Sat, Apr 25 2009 2:35 PM by julielai. 1 replies.
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kyorochan  +  699533 Mon, 20 Apr 09 07:37 PM
Hello.

I wrote an introduction of my essay about foodborne illnedd and food allergy.

I want you to check my grammar. Please!!

Thank you!


How to deal with foodborne illness and food allergy


Foodborne illness and food allergy are increasing at advanced nations particularly in the 20th century. Foods, drinks and air are very important for us to live. We have to take nourishment and water necessary to maintain health. However, there are problems with the foods and the drinks that we are always eating and drinking. Patients for the foods and the drinks are increasing right not more than the past. The illnesses by food are divided into two big categories, which are foodborne illness and food allergy.


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julielai  +  700946 Sat, 25 Apr 09 02:35 PM

Instances of Foodborne illness and food allergy are increasing

to remain healthy

 

"at advanced nations" -- Do you mean in developed countries?

 

What do you mean by "Patients for the foods and the drinks are increasing right not more than the past"?

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