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Pianist Yukiko Akagi has performed as soloist, chamber musician, and accompanist throughout the United States and Japan, appearing at such distinguished venues as Alice Tully Hall in Lincoln Center, Steinway Hall, and Carnegie’s Weill Recital Hall. She made her solo recital debut at Weill Recital Hall this past October.

A native of Japan, Ms. Akagi began her music studies at age four, and continued at the Preparatory Division of Toho Conservatory in Tokyo. Ms. Akagi holds a Bachelor of Music degree from Toho Conservatory, where she studied with Ms. Nobuko Amada and Mr. [FIRST NAME] Nobuyoshi, and a Master of Music degree from Mannes College of Music, where she studied solo piano with Dr. Jerome Rose and chamber music with Diane Walsh, J.Y. Song and David Krakauer. Her extensive training has included piano studies with Jean-Yves Thibaudet, Gorgy Sandor, Menahem Pressler, Earl Wild, Phillipe Bianconi and Mikhail Voskressensky.

Ms. Akagi was invited to participate in the European American Music Alliance Festival in Paris 2002, and in the International Institute & Festival in 2000, 2001 and 2003. She is currently pursuing a Professional Studies diploma with Dr. Solomon Mikowsky at Manhattan School of Music. Ms. Akagi has developed an extensive career as a musician in New York City.


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