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What is the secret for loving horror movies which violating the human nature? The psychologists believe that viewing violence increases aggression. In contrast, experts on youth and violence believe that violence in the media has no direct link to real life violence. Human beings' characters based on mental and emotion .So whatever happens, will affect them either in positive or negative way.  By watching, involving or passing through this kind of moments which might be peace or violence. As a result, repeated exposure to this kind of movies may increase the probability of violent behavior, affect kids personality and it is a major contributor to aggressive and violent behavior in real live.

 The probability of violent behavior may be increased through the demonstration and reinforcement of violent attitudes, problem solving strategies. Furthermore, through alterations in related cognitive processes.

Kids personality may be affected, they may be afraid from anything. Their minds will never be in peace again. They will have nightmares day and night, they will imagine all the scary scenes and they will have phobia.

It is a major contributor to aggressive and violent behavior in real live. When they watch such kind of movie especially kids and teens, they use to behave like them. They increase their enthusiasm in violence scenes. Actually this category likes to imitate all the up normal, scary and frightful scenes. They think that they have the most energetic power all over the world. They start to show off   among their colleagues and friends in schools or clubs or even in their neighborhood. They never think mentally how bad it is. It may hurt themselves or others. Their love to be strong and can do anything make them blind to the bad effects to their environment.

Finally, watching this kind of movies will affect the behaviors and mentality of people. It takes them away from real life. They think life is so complicated and full of hatred. They see only the black side of the world. Their characters are pessimistic

 The probability of violent behavior may be increased through the demonstration and reinforcement of violent attitudes, problem solving strategies because it gives ideas of how to be acriminal. (?). Furthermore,it gives alterations in related cognitive processes. [no main verb!]

child personality may be affected and they may be becomes afraid of anything. Their minds will never be in peace again. They will have nightmares day and night,Furthermore, they will imagine all the scary scenes. .

Horror movies are  a major contributor to aggressive and violent behavior in real life. When they watch such kind of movies especially children and teens, they try to behave like them. thus increase their enthusiasm of violence scenes. Actually this category likes to imitate all the unnatural scary and frightful scenes. They think that they have the ability to do anything.(?) They start to show off   among their colleagues and friends in schools or clubs or even in their neighborhood. They never think mentally how bad it is. It may hurt themselves or others. Their love to be strong and ability to do anything make them blind to the bad effects of their environment.

Finally, watching horror movies have bad results on child personality and because it is the major contributor to aggressive and violent behavior in real life it will affect the humanity and mentality of people. It takes them away from real life. They think life is so complicated and full of hatred. They see only the black side of the world. Their characters are pessimistic

hi abosalman

Thank you so much u saved my day actualy a frind was asking me to do an essay for her about the negative affect of horror movies on ppl

 i liked what you wrote it is really clear and simple ,, and i do beleive that violence in all kind of movies stayes in human deep inside and it will come out in very bad raction.

in our religon islam specially for ( shiaa ) since im not (sunny) we have studies that forbed children and adults to watch any kind of strong  scary scenes  coz it will stay in human memory and therefor affect his behavior and the way he thinks.

 have a gr8 day :)