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Latest post Sun, Feb 15 2009 5:30 AM by vikasjnu. 1 replies.
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nofeela  +  671666 Fri, 13 Feb 09 07:01 PM
Hello every body .. this is my descriptive paragraph ..could you please correct it..


When I was small, at my first year at school. My old sister had made a party

For me because I was the best student in my class. My sister Rasha is an Arabic teacher .she love teaching. she taught me the difficult lessons I had. she is good in every thing. One day at my grandfather's house , my sister  rash cooked a KABSAH –an Arabic dish- for lunch, it was the best KABSAH I ever eat. My sister Rasha is kind with all children. And they love her a lot because she is always give them sweets and toys. She also kind with my parents. She helped my mother in the housework. And she is good with my father too. when she got married, I cried and I told her: you can not leave us, but said : I will not leave you . and she told me that she will come to see me every day, and that pleased me . after a year of her marriage, she had a baby , and she call her Reema . she was very beautiful. I love her a lot, because she is my nephew. Now I think I become like my sister . I trying to be like her because she is my ideal.                                                                                                                     

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vikasjnu  +  672697 Sun, 15 Feb 09 05:30 AM
In the first year of my school, when I was a kid, my elder sister had given a party for me because I was adjudged the best student in my class. My sister Rasha teaches Arabic; she loves teaching! She always helps me with my lessons. She is good at everything she does! Once, at my grandfather's home, Rasha cooked Kabsah - an Arabic dish- for lunch. It was the best Kabsah I had ever eaten! Rasha is kind with children who of course love her a lot. She often gives them sweets and toys! She is also kind with our parents; she helps mother with the domestic chores and also takes good care of our father. When she was getting married, I had cried and had told her, "You cannot leave us!" She had said that she will not leave me and will come to see me everyday. Her assurance had delighted me! A year has passed since her marriage and now she is blessed with a girl baby named Reema. My niece Reema is a heavenly beauty and I love her a lot. I hope to emulate my sister. She is my ideal woman and really inspires me.

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