Please correct my resume

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Prawit-_-  #499619  Sat, 12 Apr 08 05:37 AM

Please correct my resume as below, thank you.

 

OBJECTIVE

 

A position as a Human Resources Officer.

 

SKILLS

 

  • Proficient in Microsoft Office package.
  • Familiar with Adobe Photoshop.
  • TOEIC Score = 620

 

WORK EXPERIENCE

 

*** Co., Ltd., Chonburi               2003 - Present

Safety Staff

  • Trained employees in basic safety and fire protection.
  • Prepared accident reports for safety committee meeting.
  • Prepared power consumption reports for environment committee meeting.
  • Created safety magazines to distribute to employees.
  • Promoted safety activities to reduce amount of accidents.
  • Responsible for safety inspection to employees and subcontractors.
  • Measured environmental condition in workplaces.

 

***&*** Ltd., Partnership, Chonburi                  2002 - 2003

Foreman

  • Supervised and distributed work to employees.
  • Coordinated with industrial company to buy metal scraps.

 

 

EDUCATION

 

Bachelor of  Political Science, 2008

Major: International Relations and Comparative Governments and Politics

*** University, Bangkok

 

REFERENCES

 

Available upon request.

 

  
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Mister Micawber  #500096  Sun, 13 Apr 08 11:06 AM
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It looks very good to me, Prawit.  I have indicated a few corrections in bold:




OBJECTIVE


A position as a Human Resources Officer.


SKILLS


  • Proficient in Microsoft Office package.
  • Familiar with Adobe Photoshop.
  • TOEIC Score = 620

WORK EXPERIENCE


*** Co., Ltd., Chonburi               2003 - Present

Safety Staff

  • Trained employees in basic safety and fire protection.
  • Prepared accident reports for safety committee meetings.
  • Prepared power consumption reports for environment committee meetings.
  • Created safety magazines to distribute to employees.
  • Promoted safety activities to reduce numbers of accidents.
  • Held responsibility for safety inspections for employees and subcontractors.
  • Measured environmental conditions in workplaces.

***&*** Ltd., Partnership, Chonburi                  2002 - 2003

Foreman

  • Supervised and distributed work to employees.
  • Coordinated with industrial company to buy scrap metal.


EDUCATION


Bachelor of  Political Science, 2008, *** University, Bangkok

Major: International Relations and Comparative Governments and Politics


REFERENCES


Available upon request.


  
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Prawit-_-  #500871  Tue, 15 Apr 08 04:07 AM

Mister Micawber, thank you very much. I will revise the resume as your suggestion.

Prawit

  
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