Anonymous  +  589628 Thu, 20 Nov 08 02:11 AM Dear Mr.YYY Greeting from ABC company.First of all, I would like to introduce myself. My name is *** purchaser from *** limited. I have attached the *** machine purchasing order for your reference. Please send us the proforma invoice to refer the payment. If you have any problems, please do not hesitate to contact us. Best regards, *** -- Please correct my sentenc if you have more suggesstions please add them into the sentence. -- Thank you very much Mina. Anonymous Regards

	moduffycobb  +  589703 Thu, 20 Nov 08 05:02 AM Hell Mina, Here are a couple of marked corrections. Check out my changes in bold. Overall great work though! Hope this helps. Mo. Dear Mr.YYY, Greetings from ABC company. First of all, I would like to introduce myself. My name is *** and I am a purchaser from *** limited. I have attacheded the purchase order for the *** machine purchasing order for your reference. Please send us the proforma (sp - performance? purchase?) invoice to us when you refer the payment. If you have any problems, please do not hesitate to contact us. Best regards, moduffycobb Joined on Fri, Nov 7 2008 Charlottetown, Prince Edward Island, Canada New Member 08 Regards