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Anonymous  #433328  Mon, 22 Oct 07 11:19 AM

Dear Sir,

With reference to the above, I would like to inform you  that I would bank –in cheque amount of RM*** to pay in advance effective from 1/11/2007 until 1/10/2008 for housing loan.

Kindly close my auto debit into my account *** for deducting monthly fees.

Thank you for your cooperation.

Yours faithfully
  
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Mister Micawber  #433333  Mon, 22 Oct 07 11:41 AM

Dear Sir,

With reference to the above, I would like to inform you that I [am enclosing?] a cheque in the amount of RM*** to pay my housing loan in advance effective from 1/11/2007 until 1/10/2008.

Kindly close my auto-debit for deducting monthly fees from my account *** .

Thank you for your cooperation.

Yours faithfully,
  
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Anonymous  #433338  Mon, 22 Oct 07 11:52 AM

thanks for help..
  
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