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Latest post Thu, Mar 6 2008 11:14 PM by Mister Micawber. 5 replies.
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Anonymous  +  485578 Thu, 06 Mar 08 10:12 AM
The lot no. 4-7 on the booking form is incorrect due to the typo, it should be 6-10. We will pay more attention to avoid this from happening. Sorry for any inconvenience cause . Please help to release shipment.
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Mister Micawber  +  485586 Thu, 06 Mar 08 10:28 AM
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Lot no. 4-7 on the booking form is incorrect due to a typo; it should read "6-10". We will pay more attention to avoid this happening again. Sorry for any inconvenience caused. Please help to release this shipment.

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Anonymous, 1 yr 260 days ago

Please find attached the revised PO for the correct brand of ***. Your order is ready in our office at our reception desk, please collect them asap  / The original document will be sent to you by courier tomorrow. Please sign and return one copy to us for reference.


Your company name *** name has been changed to ***. Please find attached copy of the revised PI.

Mister Micawber  +  485646 Thu, 06 Mar 08 01:13 PM
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Please find attached the revised purchase order for the correct brand of ***. Your order is ready at the reception desk in our officePlease collect it as soon as possible. The original document will be sent to you by courier tomorrow. Please sign and return one copy to us for reference.


Your company name, *** , has been changed to ***.   Please find attached a copy of the revised PI.

 

 

I don't know what 'Pl.' means at the end of your message; therefore the person who receives your message may not understand, either.  As a rule, do not use abbreviations in business communications.

 

Anonymous, 1 yr 260 days ago
yes, message noted and thanks.

do you think below sentence is odd ? (underline parts)

Please find attached the purchase order for ***. I would be grateful if you could send us your purchase order as soon as possible.

Mister Micawber  +  485824 Thu, 06 Mar 08 11:14 PM
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I would be grateful if you could send us your purchase order as soon as possible.”

That is a fine, business-like sentence. 

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