User_gary  +  381938 Wed, 20 Jun 07 11:26 AM You was selected for our esteemed organisation to work with us as a `computer programmer' in the last month, as you know. So hereby we request you to follow the following procedure to get appointment letter from us. (1) Pay $1700 before 25th. (2) You must have passing certificate of your major subject. Duly fill the attached form, and submit along with your payment of $1700 before June 25th. Please correct my sentences. User_gary Joined on Fri, Jan 5 2007 Senior Member 2,561 Honesty is the best policy

	Mister Micawber  +  381971 Wed, 20 Jun 07 12:22 PM Not good, Gary--the impression is rather rude, too  Do not speak of your own company/organization/wife etc as 'esteemed'.  Try: Last month, you were selected to work with us as a computer programmer.  Please take the following steps to obtain your letter of appointment: (1)  Submit the passing certificate for your major subject. (2)  Fill in the attached form and submit it along with your payment of $1700 before June 25th. (Personally, I find it shocking that your company is charging a person to be hired.  That could well be a criminal offense in some societies.) Mister Micawber Joined on Wed, Aug 4 2004 Yokohama Veteran Member 30,769 'The question is,' said Humpty Dumpty, 'which is to be master-- that's all.'