Please correct my sentense...tq

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Anonymous  #545792  Thu, 24 Jul 08 08:42 AM

Could someone please help to correct my sentences  below please, as I'm  not well verse in English for contract statement.  Thanks.

 

Wish to highlight you that as per summary of ABC’s offer which you have signed earlier and as per the requirement below, we shall therefore maintain your clause of normal working hours for onshore and offshore work sites.  Therefore, I will be sending you 2 original copy of contract for you to initial and replace page no 2 & 3 and return back one copy for our file.

 

  
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Mister Micawber  #545867  Thu, 24 Jul 08 01:13 PM
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We wish to highlight that as per the summary of ABC’s offer, which you signed earlier, and as per the requirement below, we shall retain the clause regarding normal working hours for onshore and offshore work sites. I will be sending you two original copies of the contract.  Please replace pages 2 and 3, and initial and return one copy for our file.
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