[title]Family quotes[/title] [description]Welcome to our family quotes section! Here you'll find some of the funniest (and wisest) quotes on the subject of family life![/description]
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Latest post Thu, Dec 13 2007 4:04 PM by Grammar Geek. 1 replies.
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Anonymous  +  452459 Wed, 12 Dec 07 03:31 PM

She is one of the most lovers for the deaf... She is terrific vision... She is an also part of deaf and always precious for the deaf so much... example: - God looks after Israeli because he is the first lover of Israel’s people... Similarity Sarah was always her lovable and her loyal to help for the deaf, who have got some problem...  She deeply taught to the deaf fully about things of her knowledge and spirituality. Some deaf was actually excellent gain of knowledge and strong faith by listening her teaching for god... we ready know that she is a highly person and was being depend by some star bosses but she was some ignore her work for boss and concentrated to deaf while what they is wanting spiritually.. It’s most important seriously that someone, who was done like her doing for god...We were too impressive and graceful her doing... We really realized that No one’s doing is same as her doing as lovable for the deaf...  We are very appreciative god through her, who was part of deaf... We are brightly understood what god proved his quality such things as love, precious, mercy and humility as well as her qualify and gifted her for deaf... Sarah Please keeps your lovable for the deaf... We have still worried about her, who was terrible and pressure under things by the opposite of god… but she is still faith his religion until now under terrible and pressure... We are praying to god for her... we would unlimited helpfully whatever her problem…

 

Grammar Geek  +  452837 Thu, 13 Dec 07 04:04 PM

Anon, hi.

A few things:

This is not a sentence - it's a rambling collection of disjointed thoughts.

If I am going to be perfectly honest, you have not put enough thought into this to justify our time in "fixing" it.

A sentence ends with a period. You don't use ... to connect loosely related thoughts into one massive paragraph.

You also need to look up lover and lovable. That are not used correctly, nor is vision. If you just rewrite it that way, we'll have to say "What did you mean by this?"

If you go back and try to rework this, using proper punctuation and breaking it down into at least two, and possibly three paragraphs, someone will have a look. You may want to say who "She" is.

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