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A restaurant report:

I went into Nono, a well-known restaurant among the American people living in Korea in the chic district of Seongnam. As usual, the streets of Seongnam were teeming with the weekend crowd, mainly consists of young adults. When I entered the restaurant with much anticipation, l was greeted by a waiter. He ecorted me to a nice table at the well-lit spot and handed me a menu sheet. The menus were mainly that of Korean and some Western. I was curious why American people would visit such a restaurant that serves mainly Korean food and soon, I found the answer. I ordered Jjimjim, the tradition spicy Korean dish served with all the servings of sidedishes that this restaurant regularly offers/serves with regular meals. The table is made of  wood, and I sat on a clean cushion. The cushion was plushy and offered comfortable sitting, After sitting there for five minutes with a cup of water, the food arrived. I took a bite and was pleasantly surprised. Although I was told the dish will be spicy, it wasn't as spicy as expected but was mildly spicy with some sweet tangy taste that pleased my palate quite nicely. The usual range of sidedishes seemed to be prepared  with much care that a restarant with this level of menu prices can possibly offer. Most of their menus were in five thousand won ranges. When I finished eating my dish, I was handed a cup of coffee that tasted quite nicely. My overall rating for this restaurant is "Thumb's up," but shouldn't expect an extraordinary night-out eating experience but that of a pleasant surprise with good service in the price range that wouldn't hurt your pocket books.            

Doll wrote:

A restaurant report: I went into (I think 'into' is more direct and can be used instead of 'to' if the action is there to indicate I went directly into the premises) Nono, a well-known restaurant among the American people living in Korea in the chic district of Seongnam. As usual, the streets of Seongnam were teeming with the weekend crowd, mainly consists of young adults. When I entered the restaurant with much anticipation, l was greeted by a waiter. He ecorted me to a nice table at the well-lit spot and handed me a menu sheet. The menus were mainly that of Korean and some Western. I was curious why American people would visit such a restaurant that serves mainly Korean food and soon, I found the answer. I ordered Jjimjim, the tradition spicy Korean dish served with all the servings of sidedishes that this restaurant regularly offers/serves ( I would tell serve )(I think the restaurant is the one serving; thus, offers shoulg be right) with regular meals. The table is  (Yes, I agree, 'was' sounds better or correct as the case might be)made of  wood, and I sat on a clean cushion. The cushion was plushy and offered comfortable sitting, After sitting there for five minutes with a cup of water, the food arrived. I took a bite and was pleasantly surprised. Although I was told the dish will be spicy, it wasn't as spicy as expected but was mildly spicy with some sweet tangy taste that pleased my palate quite nicely. The usual range of sidedishes seemed to be prepared  with much care that a restarant with this level of menu prices can ( I am ambivalent about using could or can here ) possibly offer. Most of their menus were in five thousand won ranges. When I finished eating my dish, I was handed a cup of coffee that tasted quite nicely. My overall rating for this restaurant is "Thumb's up," but ( who?) (I think it is optional -- the review is obviously directed at people and could  be done without)  are expected to   shouldn't expect an extraordinary night-out eating experience but that of a pleasant surprise with good service in the price range that wouldn't (I don't understand, it looks fine as it is) hurt your pocket books. Thank you for correcting mine.      I highlighted the places which need correction and punctuation.