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Believer  #486916  Mon, 10 Mar 08 09:46 AM

Hi,

Please correct this.

Spring is here and has come like steps of an eager father bringing a gift to his loving son sleeping in his bed on Christmas eve -- tiptoeing ever so quietly trying not to wake his son up.. But spring nonethless has made through the door and along came sharp, yet low chirps of birds. This is the season in which people let the hardened muscles get loosened and try to move about in anticipation of something different, trying to make up for all those days they were stuck in their homes.  

Coming of spring has brought new work to be done too like fixing up old cracked walls and rearranging closets. Spring is a season is fluttering hearts but also is a season that bring new loads of age-old work.

  
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Marius Hancu  #486950  Mon, 10 Mar 08 12:40 PM

 Christmas Eve

 those days during which/when they were stuck in their homes. 

Spring is a season of fluttering hearts
  
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